That was ok,
I liked that one better then your other and it is all good but a few adjusts need to be made to make it a little better the past at the end sucks, you know hwen your name pops up because it ruins it,
solution: Put that at the begining and use the Newgrounds preloader, so while they read the credits the movie loads :-D
Also you should edit the mouths on the characters so it looks like they are talking, that is easily done,
Those are the only pro's and cons I can name also next time make it longer,
Spancker